My six-word memoir(s)

Heart on sleeve, head in clouds Beyond the clouds lie sunlit skies Shifted gears. Still stuck in Park Writerchick tagged me with this six-word memoir meme, which was originated by bookbabie. I couldn’t resist a word challenge, but wore myself out trying to do this one, so I’m calling it quits with my most recent … Continue reading My six-word memoir(s)

Bad writing

The entry below (Dancing with the wind) is true. It happened, it was charming and memorable, and I really wanted to capture it so that I could revisit it. But I read it now and it sounds stilted, contrived, overly dramatic. I wish I could figure out why, but I just can’t seem to put … Continue reading Bad writing